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RevelationsNight falls. She opens
her book to Revelations.
The world ends outside.
Like Cartoon LoversHe strums his guitar
outside the art shop, waiting
for her as he sings
about lost country roads
and crucified thieves
finding redemption,
his mucked boots scuffing
the sidewalk.

She comes out
during her smoke break—
skirt fluttering about her legs,
head haloed by a red bandana,
sandled feet displaying
a pentagram tattoo
above her toes.

Her fingers go to the beads
around her neck and slip them
between her teeth, rolling
them with her tongue,
her lips curving into
a slanted smile.

He stops strumming,
and they head to the back
of the shop.

His kisses fill her up.
Bubbles erupt inside at
the sound of his Southern drawl
as he te
Breaking PointThe world is a beast
of a burden, and I've been
holding on too long.

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Recklessby ~TheEmptyChest

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Six-word story. A little cliché maybe, but I still like it.
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Category: Literature / Prose / Fiction / Romance / General / Short Stories

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!KKWriting Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
as all your work is, this is just amazing! A simple fact of life that can yet still bring me tears!
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~TheEmptyChest Sep 25, 2012
Aww, thank you so much! That means so, so much to me. :hug:
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!KKWriting Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! :hug:
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~NotenSMSK Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Short and cliche no doubt but then again six word stories are rarely very unique (although they are then exceptionally good like some of yours).
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~TheEmptyChest Sep 22, 2012
Thank you! (Well, at least it's good.)
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~NotenSMSK Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome. Also... read this :) [link]
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~TheEmptyChest Sep 22, 2012
I just did. Wow, it's really similar to mine. :giggle:
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Mood: Joy ~cskadoz Sep 20, 2012   General Artist
hey . . . it's a guy thing! this rocks!
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~TheEmptyChest Sep 20, 2012
Lol, thanks! XD
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~angelichope Sep 18, 2012
Nice!:)
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