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She drinks her whiskey straight

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She drinks her whiskey straight
like her daddy did—it makes
her feel close to him.

He left during the winter.
She sits where he used to
every afternoon,
watching the setting sun
bring cold days to their end.
Blanket bunched
around her shoulders,
she drowns herself,
the silence carrying
her daddy’s voice.
NaPoWriMo, Poem #15
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PennedinWhite's avatar
This is a stunning piece. I love the powerful imagery you presented through so few words.

Well done! :heart: