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my worst fear is that
no one will be there to push
you out of the way

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Another haiku. Decided to go the "no caps" route with this one, just for fun.

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~NotenSMSK Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your six word stories and your Haiku's are always beautiful. In this one, you took a different approach. Rather than saying "I shall be alone" or anyother such statement, you state that no one will be able to push you out of the way. That in itself works for me! Keep it up!
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:iconchewyraezen:
you are very welcome :)
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:iconangelichope:
I like it and relate; loneliness is not a good thing!!! I think everybody should fear that!
Beautiful message!
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:icontheemptychest:
Thank you very, very much!
I think everyone DOES. ^^
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:iconangelichope:
Very welcome!
You're right; everyone does, as they should!
:glomp:
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:iconbelarosewolf:
~BelaRoseWolf Sep 25, 2012  Student Writer
This is a really powerful haiku! :) I think it's interesting how there are no caps. Great work!
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:icontheemptychest:
Thank you very much! Yeah, I like how I decided to shirk caps here. :D
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:iconbelarosewolf:
~BelaRoseWolf Sep 25, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome! :D I like it too!
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